Is this letter with any grammar and spelling mistakes? I drafted this letter with whatever knowledge I have but I think there are lot of grammar mistakes which I need a good samaritan to re write for me. Kindly, re draft or re write it for me as I intend to send our to solicit business from ocean freight forwarders. TQ so much in advance!
Dear Gentleman
We are in the process of developing a maritime website to display daily/weekly/monthly ship departures from our country prominent ports to world-wide port destinations. The display will include vessel name, voyage number, origin departure date and destination arrival dates of every ship originate from our country ports. The sample of the website is as below shown:
[Sample Website Template ]
The ________Ship Sailing Schedule website is a useful and time saving tool that enables all Exporters, Manufacturers, Producers, Trading Companies, Indentors and Ocean Freight Forwarders, or anyone involved in freight forwarding, ocean shipping and importing and exporting to quickly find departure and arrival dates, point-to-point schedules, carrier names, port operators, haulage firms, ocean freight forwarders ,vessels and voyage numbers to assist them in planning the logistics of cargo transport.
We will be advertising about this first of its kind website in ________/______/________ and _____ radios as well as do as press release about this launch in few leading newspapers, i.e __________,________, _______to attract all exporters and shippers to use this website to find which ocean freight forwarder is representing which ship or shipping company at ________Port,___Port,_____ and . We will not show the name of shipping company at our website. We want shippers and exporters to contact the ocean freight forwarders listed at our website to give business directly to them and not ship owners or shipping companies get business from exporters through our website.
We are writing to you to find out your interest whether you would like to get contacted by the exporters or shippers through our website, who has LCL/FCL shipments looking for a ocean freight forwarder to handle their shipments? If you are interested, please send us you full contact details i.e name of person, cell phone number, email address and your office contact details, including name of shipping company you want to represent. ( Request from us the full list of ship owners or shipping companies operating in this country.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Dear Gentleman
We are in the process of developing a maritime website to display daily/weekly/monthly ship departures from our country prominent ports to world-wide port destinations. The display will include vessel name, voyage number, origin departure date and destination arrival dates of every ship originate from our country ports. The sample of the website is as below shown:
[Sample Website Template ]
The ________Ship Sailing Schedule website is a useful and time saving tool that enables all Exporters, Manufacturers, Producers, Trading Companies, Indentors and Ocean Freight Forwarders, or anyone involved in freight forwarding, ocean shipping and importing and exporting to quickly find departure and arrival dates, point-to-point schedules, carrier names, port operators, haulage firms, ocean freight forwarders ,vessels and voyage numbers to assist them in planning the logistics of cargo transport.
We will be advertising about this first of its kind website in ________/______/________ and _____ radios as well as do as press release about this launch in few leading newspapers, i.e __________,________, _______to attract all exporters and shippers to use this website to find which ocean freight forwarder is representing which ship or shipping company at ________Port,___Port,_____ and . We will not show the name of shipping company at our website. We want shippers and exporters to contact the ocean freight forwarders listed at our website to give business directly to them and not ship owners or shipping companies get business from exporters through our website.
We are writing to you to find out your interest whether you would like to get contacted by the exporters or shippers through our website, who has LCL/FCL shipments looking for a ocean freight forwarder to handle their shipments? If you are interested, please send us you full contact details i.e name of person, cell phone number, email address and your office contact details, including name of shipping company you want to represent. ( Request from us the full list of ship owners or shipping companies operating in this country.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,